Another Illustration. It's WIP and would love your feedback.
2 months ago
I think it would look better without the palm tree.
I like the idea of the palm tree, but maybe making that and the clouds fit the same style (more symmetrical and round).
I really like the palm tree. Nice lil' touch. Wondering if the clouds could match the style more... IDK.
I like the palm tree, but I don't think the balance is there, like how you have it with the skyline in your other shot. Maybe you could have some form of silhouetted shrubbery bottom left and right of the building, as if coming from behind the building.
In other news. It makes me sick this is so good!
you're a beast bro
I'd love to just bust out a whole world in this style with you. So fun and simple and good. Great work.
@Laura Bohill @Jeremiah Wingett @Jon McClure
Thank you for the feedback. The style of the tree definitely needs to be more cohesive. I'll tighten that up.
@Linda Eliasen A whole world! How about we just do 1/16 of a world?
Thank you for the kind words :)
Great work :)
Solid. I'd not duplicate the clouds, make a second, unique one. The palm tree also looks like it's growing out of the roof, have you tried placing it off to the side of the building?
Great work, great to see designers from Miami Florida :)
16 days ago
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