Here is a landing page I am working on for Memoir. Please give me some feedback on how it is... Too chopped and segmented? Or no?
This app has taken so many shapes, but we feel we finally have found the right one, so we submitted it to the App Store. I will tweet as soon as it is live.
Thanks to Catt for the iPhone template!
PS, the lame stock photo of the girl will be replaced with a real snap from the video we did.
As always - Real Pixels
3 months ago
Also, thanks to @Eddie Lobanovskiy for the icon work he did!
Lovely site. Good job @Eric!
Great idea! Can't wait 'til it's live.
This looks great!
Love the "New and Noteworthy" badge.
Nice work as usual Eric. I love the colours used and the blurred BG.
I don't feel it's segmented. I like the coloured bar you're using.
Only thing I'd like to see is the headings of each section using a heavier font weight.
Edit: Also I think the illustration styles of the iPhones should match.
Thanks everyone! @Wells Riley Apple has their eye on this and already told us we would be. (Hope so)
@Mike Busby thanks dude! Will try that and see what happens
@Zarin Ficklin thank man! See ya tomorrow evening for the Dribbble meet up?
It's a very nice design, but as you said I feel it's a little bit chopped and segmented overall. Probably the sections are too much different, specially colors. More consistent colors among the sections would help I think.
I like what I see @Eric Hoffman
@Claudio Gomboli thanks! I will play around with some of the colors. I think the animations will help and forgive some of this segmented feel as well.
Yep, looking forward to it!
Nice. Very nice.
Cool work mate!
Cool work @Eric Hoffman. Love colors
This is really nice. Loving the color palette! The text needs to be more noticeable. The images and background textures are so vibrant that the text gets a little lost in the mix. Also, the different angled phones seem a little weird for me. It feels inconsistent with the amount of space it's taking up on the left column.
@Chris No yep, @Mike Busby was saying the same thing. (re)Working text
@Agence Me (via Barthélémy Chalvet) thanks!! Love your work.
Hey Eric, this looks great! I Love It!
Thanks @Michael Parks!
Great job! The "Introducing Memoir for iPhone" text looks like it could be moved down a few pixels
I love the colours & the icons down the right-hand side!
The only thing I'd remove is the segmented bar along the top, it works between the sections, but personally I think it isn't adding anything at the top.
Beautiful!! Taking the standard app sales sites to the next level bud. Really solid work.
Love that dotted line with icons along the right side. Beautiful work bro!
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