This is coming on, but i'd maybe try a different font for "Lunch" & "Dinner", Helvetica perhaps? The overstate edge looks a little jagged as well. Nonetheless, its coming together nicely!
Looking good! I'm thinking about the copy — does pushing the word "Lunch" vs "Dinner" really make any sense (compared to using verbs)? You'll surely understand, but I'm worried you may not interpret the frame as a header, and then you'd be clueless, at least for a couple of seconds :)
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Ole Martin Kristiansen
Pumped up the contrast a bit on the 'Download our' bit.
Also — the lunch/dinner links will fade in when you hover the frame :-)
almost 2 years ago
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James ✌
This is coming on, but i'd maybe try a different font for "Lunch" & "Dinner", Helvetica perhaps? The overstate edge looks a little jagged as well. Nonetheless, its coming together nicely!
almost 2 years ago
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Liam McKay
Nice progression, this is really great work!
almost 2 years ago
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Jonno Riekwel
Looks lovely. Looks like the active lunch state is a bit pixelated on the left.
almost 2 years ago
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Thomas Maier
Looks very good! Only the left button seems a little jagged on the left..
almost 2 years ago
Looking good! I'm thinking about the copy — does pushing the word "Lunch" vs "Dinner" really make any sense (compared to using verbs)? You'll surely understand, but I'm worried you may not interpret the frame as a header, and then you'd be clueless, at least for a couple of seconds :)
almost 2 years ago
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Gedy Rivera
Amazing attention to detail.
almost 2 years ago
Cool colors!
11 months ago