i like it. only thing thats bothering me is the line weight of the "B" being so different from the rest...just feel the type needs to be more uniform..?.. just a thought
This looks great! I kind of agree with luke, but I also see what you were trying to do there... I think it works better on the 'e'. Maybe you could try leaving part of that side of the 'b' open, just using implied line? (I don't know if that'll work or not, but just a thought that popped into my head)
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Simon Gustavsson
Lovely!
about 2 years ago
nice one Floris :)
about 2 years ago
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Luke Ritchie
i like it. only thing thats bothering me is the line weight of the "B" being so different from the rest...just feel the type needs to be more uniform..?.. just a thought
about 2 years ago
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Matt Kump?
This looks great! I kind of agree with luke, but I also see what you were trying to do there... I think it works better on the 'e'. Maybe you could try leaving part of that side of the 'b' open, just using implied line? (I don't know if that'll work or not, but just a thought that popped into my head)
about 2 years ago
Thanks guys!
The line weight looks best like this imo, have tried other things but this option makes it more dynamic than other
about 2 years ago
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James Santilli
Hi Floris, were you able to work the tail into the letter 'L'? Just a thought
about 2 years ago
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Roy Smith
fine flow Floris
about 2 years ago
Made me remember THIS
12 months ago