Getting closer to a finished poster :-)
7 months ago
Looks good, but I'm confused with its beak
What are your thoughts regarding the beak @Andrés ?
I see a little monster with a small mouth, smiling, not an owl.
Sorry, maybe it's just me.
I like the rounded beak...it's unique but I still see owl. :)
Hey man! Nice that you went with solution without the outlines. So far I see it looks great. But somehow I must agree with @Andrés - there is something with the beak that that doesn't looks like a beak rather than a small mouth. It could be maybe because its not so pointed, but instead round in the bottom. Or maybe if I see that the wings are shaped like hands then the brain reads that it's something different than a bird (owl), therefore the beak seems to be a small mouth. Try to remove the thumbs.
Look forward to see the full size of the poster!!!
Hey @eduards balodis I really appreciate the feedback. It makes perfect sense now with what you're saying. I'll try and remove the thumbs. Actually, the "beak" is supposed to be open, but I think I'm having difficulties illustrating an open beak in this style. Feel free to rebound this shot with how you would make an open beak, that looks like a beak and not just an open mouth :-D
by Joaquim Marques Nielsen
Thanks for the feedback on the beak, which didn't really look like a beak on the first shot. Here's my second go at it, which I think is a massive improvement! What do you guys think? Final?
7 months ago
by eduards balodis
There you go, just some possible solutions which came to my mind:
1. Pretty much a standard beak, but I think in this case it sticks quite well with the overall style.
2. I like it less because it's a bit in perspective, but it could be a possible solution if you need a open beak.
P.S.: I kinda made the legs a bit closer. :D
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