I'd try a different font for the body copy (a sans serif). Also, try everything with a left-alignment; having everything centered is creating three sets of steps. :)
Yeah I hear you. My instinct was to go for left alignment but it didn't seem quite as balanced overall. Might try again with some different type sizing.
I was inititally pushing a left-aligned layout to the mobile view in portrait orientation, which I'm definitely going back to, because it worked a hell of a lot better with shorter line lengths.
Just a nitpick: The underlining on-hover is a little lower than feels comfortable on the .big and the body text - but it works well in the mini-footer. Maybe bring it closer to the baseline a bit?
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Finally got around to adding a bit of actually useful content to my personal landing page at http://tombryan.co
Welcome any suggestions :)
over 1 year ago
It's a little bit responsive too, but I need to work on how the social icons display on mobile.
over 1 year ago
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I'd try a different font for the body copy (a sans serif). Also, try everything with a left-alignment; having everything centered is creating three sets of steps. :)
over 1 year ago
Yeah I hear you. My instinct was to go for left alignment but it didn't seem quite as balanced overall. Might try again with some different type sizing.
I was inititally pushing a left-aligned layout to the mobile view in portrait orientation, which I'm definitely going back to, because it worked a hell of a lot better with shorter line lengths.
Thanks for commenting!
over 1 year ago
Very nice!
Just a nitpick: The underlining on-hover is a little lower than feels comfortable on the .big and the body text - but it works well in the mini-footer. Maybe bring it closer to the baseline a bit?
over 1 year ago
Thanks Zach - I'm pushing a bunch of small changes based on the feedback I'm getting and it's definitely improving :)
over 1 year ago
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by Tom Bryan
Made a bunch of small changes based on your awesome feedback, also added Basecamp login to the footer.
over 1 year ago