Developed this a bit more, now using one fo the great "Haäfe & Haph" ampersands haafe.com/
almost 3 years ago
Loving the texture, and the design in general.
The weight of the ampersand doesn't seem heavy enough.
Also, I really liked the 'and' you had in the previous shot.
I like the ampersand itself, but it feels a bit out of place with the surrounding text. The previous "and" was bit closer, I think. Texture and treatment are great!
I'd go with the "and" of the previous shot, but scaled up to better fill the corner space. Since you have space to the right of the stem of the letter T, the diagonal label could be fitted in a way that it doesn't feel to crammed, I think.
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