Nice work! I agree with Matt, in that, some variation in weight might be cool. The bottom left area of the "C" being a little fatter, etc. Few random thoughts: The "s" could scoot a little closer to the "l". The apostrophe seems a little too perfect like from a serif font or something. Maybe make it a little irregular. It would be awful to see the subtitle centered in the same location either.
That was all off the cuff. It really does look great though.
this is beautiful! I think that if you made the swash from the "s" come from the bottom, it would fix the counter issue there. and in the "a" and "l" it'd just be a matter of turning the point inside the counter into a curve.
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over 2 years ago
Really like the proportions and spacing of things. Feels like it could use a but more contrast between thicks and thins.
over 2 years ago
Nice work! I agree with Matt, in that, some variation in weight might be cool. The bottom left area of the "C" being a little fatter, etc. Few random thoughts: The "s" could scoot a little closer to the "l". The apostrophe seems a little too perfect like from a serif font or something. Maybe make it a little irregular. It would be awful to see the subtitle centered in the same location either.
That was all off the cuff. It really does look great though.
over 2 years ago
The counters of the "A" and "S" seem a little off to me, but so far this looks absolutely delicious
over 2 years ago
I like the first one but I like this one even more.
over 2 years ago
Cool :D
over 2 years ago
Very nice work.
over 2 years ago
this is beautiful! I think that if you made the swash from the "s" come from the bottom, it would fix the counter issue there. and in the "a" and "l" it'd just be a matter of turning the point inside the counter into a curve.
over 2 years ago
Beautiful!
over 2 years ago
Neato.
almost 2 years ago
Real slick.
5 months ago