Looking for some input and comments from the script typography masters here. (I'm looking at you, Jeremy Paul Beasley.)
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over 2 years ago
Really like the proportions and spacing of things. Feels like it could use a but more contrast between thicks and thins.
Nice work! I agree with Matt, in that, some variation in weight might be cool. The bottom left area of the "C" being a little fatter, etc. Few random thoughts: The "s" could scoot a little closer to the "l". The apostrophe seems a little too perfect like from a serif font or something. Maybe make it a little irregular. It would be awful to see the subtitle centered in the same location either.
That was all off the cuff. It really does look great though.
The counters of the "A" and "S" seem a little off to me, but so far this looks absolutely delicious
I like the first one but I like this one even more.
Very nice work.
this is beautiful! I think that if you made the swash from the "s" come from the bottom, it would fix the counter issue there. and in the "a" and "l" it'd just be a matter of turning the point inside the counter into a curve.
almost 2 years ago
5 months ago
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