I'm going to be careful with what I say, and I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, because I really respect you as a designer. But don't you feel you want to experiment a little more with your visual style? I mean, this is crisp, and beautifully executed (which is more than what I am doing, I might add!), but wouldn't you like to deviate a little more from the same-old-same-old. This feels so much like everything else I have seen you post on Dribbble. I know you're probably working for a client on this, but even still...
Feel free to disagree with everything that I said. I only posted this comment because you're clearly a talented guy!
5 Responses
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Jonno Riekwel
A couple of elements :P
over 1 year ago
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Miro Keller
Very clean as always. The colors are quite desaturated and brings the tone down. Maybe a bit too serious?
Still, great job :)
over 1 year ago
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David
Jonno,
I'm going to be careful with what I say, and I really hope you don't take this the wrong way, because I really respect you as a designer. But don't you feel you want to experiment a little more with your visual style? I mean, this is crisp, and beautifully executed (which is more than what I am doing, I might add!), but wouldn't you like to deviate a little more from the same-old-same-old. This feels so much like everything else I have seen you post on Dribbble. I know you're probably working for a client on this, but even still...
Feel free to disagree with everything that I said. I only posted this comment because you're clearly a talented guy!
over 1 year ago
i like your style, dude. keep doing what you're doing.
over 1 year ago
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Alex Boamfa
another subtle transparency but only to the top part this time hmmm
over 1 year ago