Fixed a few things: the E/S area in Creatures, trimmed down the top of the W in Shadow to be flush with the extending line and a couple of other small tweaks.
Now, just playing around with some styles. Thoughts?
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6 months ago
Nice style. I see you also trimmed the line above the "C". I think it was slightly better before... "C" feels now a bit isolated:)
@Jonas Söder Thanks, dude!
@Roko Kerovec Thanks for the feedback, Roko. I'll go back to the original version with the line not trimmed and compare. I think you're right.
Nicely designed, Kev. @Roko has a good point with that C, I looked at these two, and I think the same as you.
@Milosz Klimek Thanks man! I tried it out and @Roko Kerovec is definitely right. Good to hear from you!
colours and fill style feels quite retro. maybe quite 80s. what sort of music do they make?
5 months ago
Thanks for your comment, @Lyam Bewry! That's exactly the feeling we were going for. This is a personal electronic project between me and my best friend Blake. Influences include 80s dance, hip-hop and some trickles of other styles, but most notably, 80s dance.
@Kevin Burr I'm glad you said that as I was a little afraid to comment just in case it was for the complete opposite. Seems really fitting then. One thing I found is that my eyes are drawn to the lines more than the type because of the fills (and transparency). Also, as @Roko Kerovec mentioned, the C is a bit far left.
@Kevin Burr Nice exploration, Kevin. Now that you've touched on the musical styles and influences of your band, the mark totally fits. Like, *totally* fits, dude.
@Roko Kerovec and @Milosz Klimek both have very good points about the relationship between that line and the C.
Also, @Lyam Bewry has an excellent point about the weights of the lines now compared to how you've styled your text. I think what you've done with the text looks cool, but would be good to see that same technique applied throughout.
One thing someone mentioned before was that this would look cool treated as a neon sign, and, now knowing the style influences of the band, I think that's a hell of a good idea.
One thing that struck me about this is that it seems like you put a lot of effort into structuring Shadow such that it connects to the containing circle, yet I feel like Creatures has gotten less attention in that area. It would be cool to see if you could find a way to better unites Creatures with the circle. But perhaps you've already tried this and didn't like it...?
@Lyam Bewry Thanks again, Lyam. I'm glad you commented. I'll keep working with it. Cheers!
@Jon Stapp | atomicvibe Oh good! I'm glad it's working based on the musical styles and influences. This still needs a lot of tweaking to be just right. I completely agree with you about the structuring of the "Creatures" portion and how it doesn't connect as well to the containing circle. I'll play around with it. Also, love the idea of the neon sign. That is definitely worth exploring. Thanks again, man!
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