The client suggest cut out the S a bit, loosing the B (and that subtle B is not required) and gain a bit on the S more readable. Criticism is very apreciated :)
i'd say that it is more readable. looking back at the other one now, if you didn't know it was "SRB" you probably wouldn't see the "B" anyways, so that is a logical revision.
Nice revision! Definitely an improvement. ...One thing that you may want to tweak is the length of the stems on the R. The right stem would probably disappear when reduced, since it's barely a dot. Adding a little more to extend past the S would help.
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Breno Bitencourt
The client suggest cut out the S a bit, loosing the B (and that subtle B is not required) and gain a bit on the S more readable. Criticism is very apreciated :)
over 2 years ago
i'd say that it is more readable. looking back at the other one now, if you didn't know it was "SRB" you probably wouldn't see the "B" anyways, so that is a logical revision.
over 2 years ago
good work totally better.
over 2 years ago
Love it
over 2 years ago
Nice revision! Definitely an improvement. ...One thing that you may want to tweak is the length of the stems on the R. The right stem would probably disappear when reduced, since it's barely a dot. Adding a little more to extend past the S would help.
over 2 years ago
^ Agreed.
over 2 years ago
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Bouké
Yawp, nice.
almost 2 years ago