First icon I created from the beginning till the end. Please give me some feedback, I would like to improve my work!
about 2 years ago
I'd say a little larger cut-out holes on the sign, make them a little more noticeable? Maybe bring the 2 lines of text closer together also. Justathought :)
You forgot the shadow of the right part of the cord, on the hook. The cord should have a shadow on the panel, too.
It's really beautiful !
You should look at the way it's hanging there. Doesn't feel natural. It should be hanging a bit more to the left.
by Emiel Janson
Just a little illustration. I worked on most of the comments on the earlier version. So... I hope you like!
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Emiel Janson
First icon I created from the beginning till the end. Please give me some feedback, I would like to improve my work!
about 2 years ago
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Russell Bishop
I'd say a little larger cut-out holes on the sign, make them a little more noticeable? Maybe bring the 2 lines of text closer together also. Justathought :)
about 2 years ago
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Michaël Betsch
You forgot the shadow of the right part of the cord, on the hook.
The cord should have a shadow on the panel, too.
It's really beautiful !
about 2 years ago
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Jonno Riekwel
You should look at the way it's hanging there. Doesn't feel natural. It should be hanging a bit more to the left.
about 2 years ago
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App Store sign
by Emiel Janson
Just a little illustration. I worked on most of the comments on the earlier version. So... I hope you like!
about 2 years ago