Looking good there, Sean. Interesting new direction which seems to work.
Suggestions:
-The "p" and 2 "o"s need a lot of overshoot.
-The "s" sees to be leaning to the right on the top. the top curve of an "s" is usually smaller than the bottom one while you made it identical which make it seem unbalanced. I'd either make the whole top curve smaller or maybe just shorten the top end.
-The "o"s seem too close. I'd give them some breathing room inbetween maybe even little ink traps.
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The other one had more character but this is nice too.
over 2 years ago
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Matt Kump?
I suppose it depends who the audience is, but this is solid.might move that L over just a touch.
over 2 years ago
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Shaun Moynihan
This looks to appeal to a wider audience... I really like it!
over 2 years ago
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Chris Young
Nice one Sean. The spacing of the 's' and 'p' seem a tiny bit loose for me, but otherwise like it.
over 2 years ago
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Rick Murphy
You took my favorite part of the other one and made it the whole logo. I think its great.
over 2 years ago
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Made By Thomas
Solid solution Sean.
over 2 years ago
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Julian Hrankov
Looking good there, Sean. Interesting new direction which seems to work.
Suggestions:
-The "p" and 2 "o"s need a lot of overshoot.
-The "s" sees to be leaning to the right on the top. the top curve of an "s" is usually smaller than the bottom one while you made it identical which make it seem unbalanced. I'd either make the whole top curve smaller or maybe just shorten the top end.
-The "o"s seem too close. I'd give them some breathing room inbetween maybe even little ink traps.
-"o-l" spacing seems a little loose
over 2 years ago
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Christopher Magruder
too chunky.
over 2 years ago
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Orman Clark
This is great stuff but man I loved the other direction!
over 2 years ago
There's more of a cohesive connection in the previous design.
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Michael Spitz
Nice option as well.
over 2 years ago
I like it. Nice and clean.
over 2 years ago
Damnit, this is SICK!
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Daniel Waldron
It's clean. I would definitely work on the kerning a bit more though.
over 2 years ago