About page layout for my new website coming within the next couple of months. This is the first page that I've finished. Please check out the full layout attached and let me know what you think. Thanks!
11 months ago
I know I'm late, but: Like the color scheme, man. A few things I notice:
"Here's to the world-changers..." and "I'm a creative who..." seem to be competing headlines on the page. I personally think the world-changers line is a bit vague, might be better to just have the second one be your intro.
The shadow underneath your gray box seems really heavy, and it might not even be necessary. Would be worth trying a version without it.
The white lines splitting up the boxes seem really stark and loud, it might look nice with a black line instead, or perhaps no lines at all. You're currently separating "Brands I've worked with" and "People I've worked with" headlines with the brands and people, seems to be a strange division. Wouldn't you want the headlines to align to the brands and people, and if anything have the line horizontally separating the two lines?
Your body copy is a touch small, especially if it will be viewed on mobile.
Hope that helped, looking forward to seeing it live.
10 months ago
@Benjamin Krogh // Thanks man, all great input! Some of the stark style is something I'm going for, but most of what you said I think I'll probably revise :) Thanks!
6 months ago
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