Fighter

Local Running

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5 Responses

  1. Pro Fighter Steve Fisher

    So this is still rough but I'd love some feedback. Meant to convey motion in a not-so-obvious way. The new event is meant to be taken seriously and attract a wide spectrum community people. Plus the community has great edwardian architecture which is pulled into the color palette through the brown.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Pro Mesker-m-2 Michael Mesker

    This typeface is interlocking really well. I like what's happening so far!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Jponch_avatar_large Jared Ponchot

    This may be wrong (or at least nit-picky), but it appears as though the space between the ascender on the L and the left side of the H is slightly less than the space between the left and right sides of the H. I'd try to make these visually equal I think. I dig the overlay look you've got going on here though.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Fighter Steve Fisher

    Thanks for the responses guys.

    @Jared: Yeah. Spacing is off a little bit (nice eye) and there's even a color issue where the 'H' and 'M' connect. I'm adjusting those things. Good news is the client likes the direction.

    over 1 year ago

  5. Pro Jponch_avatar_large Jared Ponchot

    Happy clients are always a good thing :-) I dig the color palette too btw.

    over 1 year ago

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