Nice and dynamic. I'd try smoothing out some of those curves slightly, notably the inner curve where the stem turns into the crossbar/swash. At the top, the left stroke seems to get a little bit too thin as well. I like how this is coming together in your recent shot by the way!
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Really trying to come up with a good clean mark for myself. Any feedback, advice, ??
over 1 year ago
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Claire Coullon
Nice and dynamic. I'd try smoothing out some of those curves slightly, notably the inner curve where the stem turns into the crossbar/swash. At the top, the left stroke seems to get a little bit too thin as well. I like how this is coming together in your recent shot by the way!
over 1 year ago
Thank you - that means a lot. I'll keep working on it.
over 1 year ago