What do you think? Need your opinion.
7 months ago
Very nice, only thing at first looks the letter W looks like an A
I LOVE you and your work but this is way too BUSY!
love it, but i must admit it did take me a minute or two to read what it said.
It is a bit busy. I think more spacing would be helpful.
It might be a busy. But still looks pretty cool.
I jibe with guys this time Master Sergey, even 2010 looks like 2020 :(
Personally, I like how hasty this looks. It's very immediate. However, if you're down to refine it, that's a-ok.
so many nice things happening in each letterform/lig, but as I'm assuming this is for a tee, still some spacial issues affecting readability at that scale
Very cool but had no idea what it said until I re-read the shot title.
Love your work, Sergey, but a bit busy for me also.
But there are some damn nice letters in there. Just a bit of clean up maybe. you'll nail it you usually do.
But then again maybe its because I'm such an old bastard. :)
I understood it from a distance (read and thought, 'Cool- is he doing work for them'?!) but up close I'm getting caught in the 'uni'. Don't forget a pixelated Russia as a backdrop. ;)
some totally cool letters mister, but i also think that overall it's too much :)
So nice one
@Mike Erickson You make me shy Mike:) Thanks for your feedback!
выглядит напряженно (даже нервно) и довольно плотно (на мой взгляд)
но ведь, как вы сами пишите, не всегда от каллиграфии требуется чтобы все читалось с первого взгляда?
@Alessio Atzeni @Ari @Eduardo Oliveira @Alen Type08 Pavlovic @Allan Lorde @Jason Carter @Mike Bruner @Florin Capota Well, I guess I should listen and pay attention to that what potential buyers of this t-shirt think about it. Will revise this option. And yes, this is a inverted scan without any tweaks so it looks a bit busy due to that reason. Will also try to make a shorter version of the Established (Est.) Thank you all fellows for your feedback!
And Damn sometimes it's so hard to make things when the result depends on you exactly, my perfection makes me redraw and polish it and spend too much time for.
@RaitG Скорее требуется не от самой каллиграфии, а от задачи и контекста. Это надпись для футболки United Pixelworkers, и те, кто будут ее покупать на сайте компании, уже заочно знают, что и у кого они берут, так что тут работа скорее выступает в роли artwork.
@Mike Clarke Mike Mike, sometimes readability means nothing, everything depends on context of the work. Those who know UP, knows!
Two first lines looks very strong and energetic. Second ones could be a little bit to the bottom I think, not so close.
@Sergey Shapiro да, я как раз это имел в виду)
возможно Established можно написать пером чуть меньшего размера по сравнению с остальными буквами?
— Как вам футболка?
— Очень вызывающе, я бы такую не надел.
— Значит, хорошая футболка, надо брать!
Legibility aside, this is still f@%&ing awesome! I wish I had your skill. #jealous
@Alexandr Ivanov Комментарий, понятный только автору?
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