This is still pretty rough, any thoughts/recommendations? Will eventually be responsive so designed for larger screens first.
10 months ago
I really dig the vibe the page is starting to give. I think that the main banner area is starting to feel polished and the hierarchy is clear. The tiles below that though do not have that same clear hierarchy. The title, price, and CTA all compete equally for your attention.
The quote I feels out of place stylistically. Try to reduce the corner radius to the size of the small touts below it or try to keep it with the nice sharp edges.
The images in the small tout do not feel like they belong next to the banner too. I think that it is because the banner image feels a bit underexposed.
The last thing I see is that the header area could benefit if you gave it more negative space and gave elements more breathing room.
Love the direction it is going though!
@Moises Oswaldo Urrutia thanks for feedback man. Much appreciated. Great points!
I'm no expert on what you do...but, it looks great from an artist's point of view!
7 months ago
Thanks @Michael Liles. The final version of this changed drastically in a good way.
Matt, the site looks like it would be a blast to code up! Looks great!
4 months ago
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