The header for a design I'm working on.
I'm a little unsure about the arrow drawing the users attention to the "Book Now" area so feedback would be welcome :)
8 months ago
Looks great! Maybe make the arrow more translucent so that it draws the eye, but isn't the focus. Right now it looks brighter than the welcome box which, I think, should be the brightest thing on the page.
Ha, I saw this logo before and figured it was a joke/personal project related to Parks & Rec. Is this a real thing? Looks awesome anyway.
Feedback-wise, if your call to action is "Book Now," I'd probably make the text on that button a little bigger. As it is now, it's almost the same size as the body text on that welcome message. You could definitely afford to bump that up a little.
@Erika Podlovics Good idea, I'll give that a try I think that'll do it :)
@Adam Nerland 10 points for spotting the reference ;) it's a fictional site I'm doing for the Build Off feature in .net magazine, as I've been watching Parks & Rec lately and the brief was a camping site I thought it'd be perfect :) Thanks for the feedback too, a very good point, sometimes you stare at a design too long and miss the obvious
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