Thought I'd take a swing at this icon thing, first time ever doing icons so be slightly kind. Feedback is as always appreciated.
These are to be used in an upcoming project of mine.
Thanks to @Katie Murray and @Daryl Ginn for their feedback and help.
11 months ago
Looking good! I especially like the clock—really nice blue.
It may be intentional, but the spacing is inconsistent on the border for the mountain & 11.
love that style, nice work!
For a first effort these are great Jamie, nicely done!
A few things I've noticed:
Calendar - some minor spacing issues. The red bit isn't centered vertically or horizontally inside its container. I'd also decrease the border radius of the red bit a little more as it's inset a fair amount from the outer edge.
Clock - the clock face isn't vertically and horizontally either.
Picture - the inner bit (the picture itself) isn't vertically and horizontally centered in the container. You've also used a different border radius on the image container than on the calendar container.
In terms of border radii - if you are looking to maintain a consistent visual style you should make sure all outer elements share the same radii. At the moment, the Calendar, Card, Photo, Chat and Envelope all have different border radii. Small things like that make a huge difference :)
Hope that helps - and again well done!
@Kevin Smith Thanks :) and thanks for the feedback will look into that for when I expand the set/use them.
@Adam Whitcroft Thanks a lot man :) I'll work on the spacing and keep consistent radii for these when I work on them next. That does help indeed, thanks again for the feedback!
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Haha just kidding. Really like the visual direction. The credit card seems to have some slight padding issues that make it inconsistent with the rest of the set.
@Zethus Suen Thanks and will look at that a bit more too. Had modelled it off a random card that I had lying about. Will play with the padding to make it more similar though. Thanks again :)
These are pretty cool, particularly like the envelope. Perhaps the clock face could have some sort of simple reflection on it, just to lift it a bit?
Great progress Jamie. I like the way that you evolve in your design style.
I love the envelope, great shading!
Very clean work.
6 months ago
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