First version of icon for upcoming iPhone app. It's for car repair shop. Hope the idea is clear :)
Any feedback would be appreciated.
11 months ago
Thanks, @Avinash Tripathi.
Super super slick. Love this.
Looks nice! Idea is indeed clear. My suggestion would be to make the top of the piston extend perfectly into the roundrect shape-the two black shapes look very strange, and it's better to bend reality a bit in this case. The overall concept and implementation is quite good, although the shading is a little dark :)
@Ollin, to be honest, I've wonder to design the icon like you suggested, but I worried it would become less clear, because this curved top is one of the characteristic part of piston. It's my first icon, so it's very constructive to hear such kind words.
Big thanks, @Alex S. Lakas.
@Karol Ortyl I understand the concern, but, the top of a piston is flat. It's circular, but it's flat. In the perspective you are using, there would be no curve at the top, just as there is no curve to the horizontal lines of the piston :)
Anyway, the shading and texture and concept are very well done, especially for a first time. Nice job!
@Ollin, existence of curve depends on kind of piston. I was working basing on piston like this one: http://bit.ly/ZdAkNr, because I have such and I was able to take it on hand and look on it from any perspective.
Really thanks for engagement :)
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