Seeking critique to make this better. Ideas?
8 months ago
Hey Shane, love the spacing of the grid, the guttering is just right. Maybe move the footer links to the left so they sit flush with the start of the HBO logo?
Hard to tell without full context of the page. First glance looks like your footer grid is off. Otherwise, looks nice and clean.
Thanks @Christian Shannon & @Jeremy Mansfield — I will occupy the space with the site logo.
Agree with @Jeremy Mansfield , it's hard to give feedback w/o context. Is that a diamond pattern at the top?
Well I think it's looking good. Maybe increase the spacing between the two lines of text on top of each movie?
Shane, nice grid man. Looks great. My only suggestion would be to give more distinction in the type between category and headline. (ie. between "Panels" and Kabir Bedi) I think some separation in there would look great.
Love the muted tan/black color palette. #classy.
Given the absence of the logo in the footer I really like this overall. I do feel the tan background could be lightened up a little. Keep up the great work @Shane Helm!
Thanks @Shaun Moynihan and for sharing on Twitter. I'll try lightening it up.
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