What do you see?
8 months ago
birthday, shopping, nail polish, happyface
Lovely colors ! I see exactly the same things as @Strahinja Todorović
Cake, nuclear plant, nail polish and a smiley.
@Dan Eden I see trees of green, red roses too. I see them bloom, for me and you and I think to myself, what a wonderful set of icons. :-P
Birthday cake, shopping bag, black lipstick and a very happy cheese.
Cake, shopping, lipstick and blushing
Birthday, shopping, nail polish & potato smiley face.
nice colours :)
Good work mate! I see a birthday cake, shopping bag, nail polish & a smiley face. What do I win?
Birthday cake, shopping bag, USB key, Pokemon.
Happy bag is happy.
cake, shopping bag, nail polish, smiley
I see someone who's turning three, a bag that's empty, nail polish that's not for me, and a smiley face that's happy.
Parties, shopping, makeup, health/happiness!
The Smiley Face seems a little out of place to me. The other icons have the objects within a circle whereas the Smiley Face seems to be the circle.
Love them! I think the smiley face needs to be a brighter, more saturated color in order to fit in better.
I also like what @Ari pointed out about the bag looking empty. Not sure if it's supposed to be that way.
I like these but I think you could tighten them up a little. I'll try and explain what I mean:
As it stands now, the nail polish icon is the odd one out: the gloss down the one side is unique. That lighting effect hasn't been applied to any other icon. Granted, on the smiley and the paper bag it's less relevant as these are flat objects, however the cake - being round - should have a similar effect on it.
The first and last curve on the cake's scalloping could be made to match the rest of the shapes, the stretched outer edges really stand out.
I'd make the candle flames uniform and work on getting the right edge of the middle flame snapped to the pixel grid.
The bag looks too flat at the moment. Paper bags like that are usually inwards on each edge, so if you can I'd try to indicate that. The top edges of the bag's ropes should be round and snapped to the pixel grid - at the minute they are flat and half pixeled. There is also something weird happening on the top right edge of the bag, sort of like the inside isn't lined up with the rest of the bag.
For the nail polish cap, I'd square that edge out. At the moment the cake, the bag and the nail polish bottle are all squared so the rounded cap looks out of place. If you want to have some rounded edges in there, I'd apply them to the top tier of the cake and to the nail polish bottle.
The smiley face's mouth isn't centered to his face. Nudge it left 1px and you're golden.
Hope that helps :)
What @Adam Whitcroft said. Also, the contrast on the smiley face is too low.
cake, shopping bag, lipstick, makeup
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